Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Much Ado About Nothing

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First review here. I'm after a second opinion from someone with a good knowledge of Seinfeld. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey)  19:01, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

Is this pee review necessary? Do you have a budding feeling that you must further improve this article? If not, I'd like to take this straight to VFH. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 23:35, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
Humour: 8.5 It was more one of those articles that makes you smile at its cleverness than laugh out loud. Very well thought through and quite enjoyable. I got slightly lost around the middle of the plot part though, maybe you could make it a bit more out-there or Seinfeld-esque if you know what I mean.
Concept: 10 Very good concept. "A show about nothing" - Much ado about nothing. Shakespeare - Seinfeld
Prose and formatting: 9 Very well written and formatted. Breaking up text with quotes receives a big plus from me.
Images: 7.5 The images were nothing spectacular. Solid, but not overly funny. Maybe a modern picture of Seinfeld or Kramer with "A modern representation; mind you that guy is the worst Kramer ever."
Miscellaneous: 8.75 Av'd
Final Score: 43.75 Good work, VFH worthy. Doesn't need any of the text changed but possibly, IMO, some funnier pictures/captions. Right now it is still great work.
Reviewer: Sir DJ ~ Irreverent Icons-flag-au Noobaward Wotm Unbooks mousepad GUN
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