I am extremely happy with this so far, although I'm still trying to think of a couple of potential improvements. It also includes an aspect that is in the ATPD competition, however entries have closed so feel free to review prior to judging completion. Pup
Nice intro. It brings to the mind a talking to the idiot, but it's nicely done and not too long. Monochromatic section nice, especially mentioning WWW and porn :P Riddicoulous. All sections looks just as you describe them. Great adavntage coz it makes article funny and reading it is actually entertaining (with the exception of the type; in the third section). It's a bit nerdish humor but it's good too. I didn't burst into laugh but it was entertaining as I mentioned. Simply: Funny but I give 8 coz of nerdishness
Greatly made, perfect concept with wonderful result. Faboulous article. Nothing to change in the concept
Prose and formatting:
The type you've used is just eye-gouging. I don't know if it was the purpose but I hated it. And hatred is something that makes the uncyclopedia articles funnier. Also those graphic sections imitating "monitors" are a perfect job. However, some parts consisted of too many numbers and some technical shit-words. I didn't like them but I know they just need to be there - it's the part of the humor and the concept. Nothing more to add.
I would give even more! Fantastic pictures, great captions, tetris, pacman, bikini girl... I can't find other word to describe it than "FA-BOU-LOUS!"
I suggest VFH
Nice score. I hope you are able to see it on your monitor