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I am extremely happy with this so far, although I'm still trying to think of a couple of potential improvements. It also includes an aspect that is in the ATPD competition, however entries have closed so feel free to review prior to judging completion. Pup

Humour: 8 Nice intro. It brings to the mind a talking to the idiot, but it's nicely done and not too long. Monochromatic section nice, especially mentioning WWW and porn :P Riddicoulous. All sections looks just as you describe them. Great adavntage coz it makes article funny and reading it is actually entertaining (with the exception of the type; in the third section). It's a bit nerdish humor but it's good too. I didn't burst into laugh but it was entertaining as I mentioned. Simply: Funny but I give 8 coz of nerdishness
Concept: 10 Greatly made, perfect concept with wonderful result. Faboulous article. Nothing to change in the concept
Prose and formatting: 9 The type you've used is just eye-gouging. I don't know if it was the purpose but I hated it. And hatred is something that makes the uncyclopedia articles funnier. Also those graphic sections imitating "monitors" are a perfect job. However, some parts consisted of too many numbers and some technical shit-words. I didn't like them but I know they just need to be there - it's the part of the humor and the concept. Nothing more to add.
Images: 10 I would give even more! Fantastic pictures, great captions, tetris, pacman, bikini girl... I can't find other word to describe it than "FA-BOU-LOUS!"
Miscellaneous: 9.3 I suggest VFH
Final Score: 46.3 Nice score. I hope you are able to see it on your monitor
Reviewer: PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 18:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC), the fuckingg Pole
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