After a couple of weeks trying to get the writing done (sort of), and finally adding some pictures, I think it's time for this article to get reviewed again. it got a sort of high rating the last time, so let's hope it gets a good one this time round.
As before, this article is taking Metal Sonic and mixing it with terminator. Therefore the whole thing is loosely based on the movies. Near enough. —The preceding unsigned comment was added byGarionepsilon (talk • contribs)
Yeah, so any reviewing would be nice.--Garionepsilon 16:37, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
The article starts off quite well with the whole Eggman-getting-eaten thing. The fates of the first three assassins are also pretty dang funny (especially the fact that Sonic merely throws a brick at each one). However, your story needs to be less melodramatic.
Metal Sonic is definitely a character in need of mocking.
Prose and formatting:
There are several typos and grammatical errors scattered throughout that need to be fixed. Submit it to Proofreading.
I like the images you have, but you need a few more.
Metal Amy. Perfect ending.
I've submitted an article to the Pee Review called Atlanta. I'd appreciate it if you would review it, please.