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ManiacJaSg-Maniac1075Complain Here 04:58, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this in the time it takes Al to tell his high school football hero story, get up from the couch, and sit on the toilet; Peggy to get to the grocery store; Kelly to date 6 guys; and Bud to get up the nerve to ask for a date from his plastic fantastic lover (in other words, 24 hours). WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 19:22, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Booking cancelled, anyone can review this one now. --ChiefjusticeWii 08:17, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 3 I don't know...it was funny in places, but the overall theme of it seemed to be an actual report on the show, not a humorous one.
Concept: 5 I saw the concept but it could have been shown quicker. The whole thing seemed dragged out - possibly shorten it?
Prose and formatting: 9 Good structure. I didn't see any mistakes or gramatical errors (though I was mainly concentrating on humour and images) but I like the different headings and how no paragrap was too long or too short.
Images: 10 LOVED THE IMAGES! I cannot see any improvement here - they were all relevant and humourous. Well done.
Miscellaneous: 5 Whilst this was well written and the images were perfect. I found myself getting a little bored. It seemed a bit dragged out. In future try to get to the point sooner so that the reader is not waiting for the humour. Other than those few things it was a wonderful article.
Final Score: 32 I think I have commented on everything above. Please continue writing you have a natural flare.
Reviewer: Some Random

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