Black Flamingo and I rewrote Marilyn's page, and now we need to put her to bed. You can join us in bed with Marilyn. Give her a good pee, she'll like that. In fact, use her, abuse her. And leave her in the end. Aleister 00:33 8 7 MMX
Or if you think she's beautiful just the way she is (which I suspect may be true), nom her for VFH. --BlackFlamingo 16:26, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
Since nobody is taking this, we have to break anominity and tell ya that both Black Framingo and I are niggers. Das rig't, niggers. So give uz a pee review, youse monther fluckin' honkie mutha's. An' yes, we will suk ya dick. Al X (real name) 18:31 11 7
I found this article to have a very funny tone. Still it doesn't fall so far into unbelievability that it becomes stupid. In other words the shock value i feel was toned down enough to make it interesting. My only problem was the word ineffably, I fear that though it is a great choice, it may be to obscure for the casual reader. I only say this because it is part of the intro.
I really like the layout of this. It is very funny yet it has a professional structure. A rather gullible person could read it and say " Wow i did not know that."
Prose and formatting:
Like i said before it has a very professional layout to it. At fist glance it looks like its legitimate. Also an explaination for the first person movie reviews(like an introduction would be nice)
Well chosen these captions and pictures are, careful to be funny, but not so far off the wall to put the reader off its believability factor.
This is what i joined this site for. Articles that would truly screw with the readers reality and be funny.
Feel free to get a second opinion as this is my first review thank you for the chance to do it.