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Black Flamingo and I rewrote Marilyn's page, and now we need to put her to bed. You can join us in bed with Marilyn. Give her a good pee, she'll like that. In fact, use her, abuse her. And leave her in the end. Aleister 00:33 8 7 MMX

Or if you think she's beautiful just the way she is (which I suspect may be true), nom her for VFH. --Black Flamingo 16:26, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
Since nobody is taking this, we have to break anominity and tell ya that both Black Framingo and I are niggers. Das rig't, niggers. So give uz a pee review, youse monther fluckin' honkie mutha's. An' yes, we will suk ya dick. Al X (real name) 18:31 11 7
Can i give it a review?   The* Lordarcadiansig (say shit) (My train wrecks) Π   ~  19:02, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
Have you read UN:PRG? If it's not good, I'll disown you.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) On Sunday, 08:12, July 11 2010 UTC
Humour: 7 I found this article to have a very funny tone. Still it doesn't fall so far into unbelievability that it becomes stupid. In other words the shock value i feel was toned down enough to make it interesting. My only problem was the word ineffably, I fear that though it is a great choice, it may be to obscure for the casual reader. I only say this because it is part of the intro.
Concept: 9 I really like the layout of this. It is very funny yet it has a professional structure. A rather gullible person could read it and say " Wow i did not know that."
Prose and formatting: 8 Like i said before it has a very professional layout to it. At fist glance it looks like its legitimate. Also an explaination for the first person movie reviews(like an introduction would be nice)
Images: 8 Well chosen these captions and pictures are, careful to be funny, but not so far off the wall to put the reader off its believability factor.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 This is what i joined this site for. Articles that would truly screw with the readers reality and be funny.
Final Score: 40.5 Feel free to get a second opinion as this is my first review thank you for the chance to do it.
Reviewer:   The* Lordarcadiansig (say shit) (My train wrecks) Π   ~  20:32, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
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