Bringer 06:35, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
||There are plenty of funny jokes but nothing "hilarious". Work on placing 1 or 2 "knee-slapping" incredibly funny jokes and you'll be on your way.
|Prose and formatting:
||Nothing absolutely dreadful though you should move the picture of Shatner to the left side of the page.
||Sorry, but 2 images won't do it. The building barely counts and the picture of Shatner, though fitting as it is, does not add much humour.
||Good concept, funny jokes, but nothing hilarious. Good start though. Add some nice pictures and fix up the pictures a bit and you'll be there.
||--MeatLoafFan 23:06, 5 April 2008 (UTC)