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Sorry, there was an accident. Tribbuca222 14:54, 4 May 2009 (UTC) Averyt131 16:39, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 2 Wow, what is this? This is not funny at all. As a matter of fact, this is hugely cliche and provides more actual facts than humor. The first thing you should do is remove the list (all lists are unfunny and tedious anyway), and give Wayne a fake personality that has some merit, for example the Hannah Montana article portrays Hannah as being Anti-Jew, which made for quite a laugh.
Concept: 3.5 Well, the concept is decent and undoubtedly can be turned into solid material, but the way you executed it turned it into terrible, amatured styled product. Also, your stacking of paragraphs kinda threw off your goal for the concept, I think you should rewrite those.
Prose and formatting: 0.5 Oh, dear Jesus. Spell check this now. NOW. Every other word was a misspelled one, and as I said before, your paragraphs NEED TO BE RESTACKED.
Images: 1 These images are just more amatuer attempts at humor. The photo editing is decent, but your captions and stuff make them ridiculous, kinda like when a producer provides Lil Wayne with a good beat and he ruins it with awful lyrics. But seriously, lil wayn on the moon?
Miscellaneous: 1.5 average
Final Score: 8.5 This is a very poor article with no chance at all.
Reviewer: The preceding unsigned comment was added by Tribbuca222 (talk • contribs)
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