Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Lettuce

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Too short, Uncyclopedian. Lengthen the review.

edit Lettuce

I've been working on this a bit since it got huffed, and just moved it into mainspace. I'm not sure if the USERNAME template is working right in the first quote, so bear with me there. And it still reads alot like the Wikipedia page that I stole borrowed most of the text from. But let me know what you think, THX. -- SmallbeerSpillin DylanSmallbeerTALKSmallbeerEDITSSmallbeer202:31, Dec 11

Humour: 5 Too much random humor, the Chinese Lettuce part is waaaaay too random, but the images and quotes are pretty good. Unfortunately, the quotes are a bit too numerous. Maybe you could remove the last quote? Also, the parts for each kind of lettuce are way too short.
Concept: 7 Putting an article in about lettuce and writing about each kind of lettuce is a good idea, keeping with the fact that this is a parody encyclopedia.
Prose and formatting: 6 Good formatting, and the prose is well-written, with the exception of the part about Chinese lettuce.
Images: 8 Both images are good, the first one better than the second. Well done there.
Miscellaneous: 6.5 Average of other scores.
Final Score: 32.5 I'm surprised we didn't have an article on lettuce already! An okay article, but it needs some work.
Reviewer: User:Uncyclopedian/sig
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