This has been reviewed 3 previous times (both reviews were helpful) and work has been done after each review. I think I'm done now, but I want a final review from an experienced editor. --SirManforman 13:44, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
Funny but nothing made me laugh and or chuckle.
I mean let it be.
Prose and formatting:
I don't see anythign wrong with it, but I've been wrong before.
Solid, the albulm cover is the best picture nothing else really satnds out to me.
Kill some girl.
This article is better than some but not feature worthy quite yet.
I still like this piece a lot. I think the changes you've been making are helping the work overall. Do you have the original review I did somewhere? The link is dead, but I'd like to refer to my previous end notes before advising further. --THINKER 06:22, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
Yes, since It was old, I got it deleted, but for historical purposes, I guess we could restore it. And actually, I don't think you reviewed it than (which is fine), but the first two times, it was reviewed my Mr.Vib and than it was reviewed by One-eyed Jack.--SirManforman 12:19, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
I contacted, a sysop, and hopefully, it should be recovered soon--SirManforman 12:27, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
Ah, indeed I did not review it that first time. I'd say then, continue to flesh the piece. Its lengthy enough, and has sections, pictures, etc., but it still needs to be filled in. The prose is offbeat and works here, but it needs to be used more in certain areas in order to continue the flow of humor throughout. I'd say get the Movie and rooftop concert sections more up to speed so it flows with the rest, and after that, maybe go through and extract some information that isn't laugh out loud-type funny (like parts of the break-up section; some could be changed, but it doesn't all need to go). --THINKER 15:24, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
What about the infobox? If you think that needs work, I'll go head and do so.--SirManforman 21:09, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
Also, would it be fine just removing the weak parts, or do you think I should work on those sections? I think it would probably long enough anyways. --SirManforman 21:28, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
I've done some fixing to the article, and I removed the weak sections for now.--SirManforman 23:42, 9 August 2007 (UTC)