I need to expand this article, I know. Just wanna know how it sounds at the moment.
Sanareth 18:06, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
There are many funny elements here, especially the "What will happen later?" part, which is surprising because usually lists weaken articles. You could probably do without the "Variations of Later" part or expand it alot. Finally the only part that wasn't too funny was the "When is Later?" part.
Nice concept, and you make it work very well. Expand it and it could be really, really, funny.
Prose and formatting:
Everything looked good as far as prose.
There are none
Add some pictures and think over some parts and this could be really good. I am anxious to see the final product.