Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Large Hadron Collider

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So, yeah... I'd like the LHC article reviewed. That's about it really.

edit Large Hadron Collider

MrDreadful 17:43, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8.5 This article, while not downright hilarious, is well worth a few chuckles here and there. I especially liked the Higgs Bo'sun explanation.
Concept: 9 I like the idea of an article about the LHC!! So much you could do with that on Uncyc.
Prose and formatting: 6.5 I mainly thought that the prose was excellent. However, there were WAAAY too many red links. You need to clear those out and add some blue ones.
Images: 3 The low point of this article. The image you have is completely relevent, but...there's really not much you can do with it to make it funny. You also need at least 1 more image later in the article.
Miscellaneous: 6.75 Average of all sections
Final Score: 33.75 You have a good article here, but it needs a bit of de-red-linkage and a couple more images. Good solid start, Mr.Dreadful!
Reviewer: Velosi-T 13:21, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
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