Make sense of what you can. Matfen 11:03, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
This article is funny in a sort of subtle, restrained way. It doesn't hit you over the head with the joke, which I like; that said, if somebody doesn't know anything about Twin Peaks they're going to be lost as hell.
The concept is great. I wish I had thought of it.
Prose and formatting:
Stays in character the entire time, and it doesn't drop out to do a cheap joke.
Is there such a thing as too many images? Yes. Yes, there is. The jokes in some of the captions fall flat and the article would benefit from a few images being plucked.
It's good, but it could be a bit shorter. Also, it needs minor grammatical cleanup, because I'm a fucking pedant, sorry.
Not bad. Certainly a clever concept. If the execution is a little tighter, this could be VFH material... if enough people get it.