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Make sense of what you can. Matfen 11:03, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 8 This article is funny in a sort of subtle, restrained way. It doesn't hit you over the head with the joke, which I like; that said, if somebody doesn't know anything about Twin Peaks they're going to be lost as hell.
Concept: 10 The concept is great. I wish I had thought of it.
Prose and formatting: 9 Stays in character the entire time, and it doesn't drop out to do a cheap joke.
Images: 6 Is there such a thing as too many images? Yes. Yes, there is. The jokes in some of the captions fall flat and the article would benefit from a few images being plucked.
Miscellaneous: 7 It's good, but it could be a bit shorter. Also, it needs minor grammatical cleanup, because I'm a fucking pedant, sorry.
Final Score: 40 Not bad. Certainly a clever concept. If the execution is a little tighter, this could be VFH material... if enough people get it.
Reviewer: --SirIsaac 20:43, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
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