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Alright, this is my second full article. I am a bit more confident in this one, but there are still no images. When you're my hieght living in a house made for midgets, you're likely to develope a severe fear of ceiling fans. 13:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

I made a review and i hope you'll like it. --LOLsupreme 13:25, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 5 It's a bit humorous but it needs more.Some people could be bored,and only naruto fans will understand what you are saying(and they could be bored).Some images would help.
Concept: 5 You are saying random things that are a bit funny at the first look but then... .You need real jokes.
Prose and formatting: 3 The article is very short,you should really consider making it longer(or being an article improver).
Images: 0 The article really needs images!
Miscellaneous: 4 The article is boring,not too boring,but still.
Final Score: 17 Hope this review helped you.
Reviewer: --LOLsupreme 13:19, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
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