Alright, this is my second full article. I am a bit more confident in this one, but there are still no images.
When you're my hieght living in a house made for midgets, you're likely to develope a severe fear of ceiling fans. 13:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
I made a review and i hope you'll like it. --LOLsupreme 13:25, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
||It's a bit humorous but it needs more.Some people could be bored,and only naruto fans will understand what you are saying(and they could be bored).Some images would help.
||You are saying random things that are a bit funny at the first look but then... .You need real jokes.
|Prose and formatting:
||The article is very short,you should really consider making it longer(or being an article improver).
||The article really needs images!
||The article is boring,not too boring,but still.
||Hope this review helped you.
||--LOLsupreme 13:19, 4 July 2008 (UTC)