Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Jew Beanie

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I have returned (to writing, I never actually left uncyclopedia.) I really need to know if I should add a more suiting ending, and if so, how should I go about it. It seems like it just stops right now. Icons-flag-pi Pirate Lord__Sonic80 (Yell  •  Latest literary excretion) __ 18:56, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 8.5 Excellent humour. The introduction is on spot. Best section is perhaps the "References in the Torah" section. It was very amusing. "Modern Usage" section kinda of lost it, until I reead the last line. The line forced a laugh. "Magical Powers" was yet agian entertaining, Especially the first paragraph of it. The "Imposter Jew Beanies" section was perhaps the weakest section, it was still good, but perhaps you could fix it up to the qualty of the others?
Concept: 9 Great idea. An excellent parody -- I have no other way to describe it.
Prose and formatting: 9 Well formatted, no noticeable mistakes in any areas. Good spelling grammar, and organization. Also, lots of blue links, which aids the score.
Images: 7 They were good enough.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 The score I would give your article overall.
Final Score: 42 Good work!This article is very entertaining and enjoyable to read. If you work on the imposters, this will be an absoultely AWESOME article. I would give it a for at VFH.
Reviewer: ~ 04:28, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
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