<!I really dont know where to take the article from here Eljawa 17:31, 3 December 2007 (UTC)>
Humour:
7.7
Pretty good in the humor department. I chuckled in a few places.
Concept:
8.7
This is an excellent concept, and can be better with some work.
Prose and formatting:
8.9
Pretty well formatted if you ask me.
Images:
8.8
Good images, and relevant, too. You might consider adding a "screenshot" of Jesus converting someone.
Miscellaneous:
6.7
The grammar could use some work. (Your, you're) Also, there's some red links you should fix/remove. Also, make it longer. How it was developed would be a good idea.
Final Score:
40.8
I think you've got a winning concept here. Clean it up, make it longer, and I'll be happy to review it again.
