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<!I really dont know where to take the article from here Eljawa 17:31, 3 December 2007 (UTC)>

Humour: 7.7 Pretty good in the humor department. I chuckled in a few places.
Concept: 8.7 This is an excellent concept, and can be better with some work.
Prose and formatting: 8.9 Pretty well formatted if you ask me.
Images: 8.8 Good images, and relevant, too. You might consider adding a "screenshot" of Jesus converting someone.
Miscellaneous: 6.7 The grammar could use some work. (Your, you're) Also, there's some red links you should fix/remove. Also, make it longer. How it was developed would be a good idea.
Final Score: 40.8 I think you've got a winning concept here. Clean it up, make it longer, and I'll be happy to review it again.
Reviewer: Crazee Boy - My Talk
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