<!I really dont know where to take the article from here Eljawa 17:31, 3 December 2007 (UTC)>
||Pretty good in the humor department. I chuckled in a few places.
||This is an excellent concept, and can be better with some work.
|Prose and formatting:
||Pretty well formatted if you ask me.
||Good images, and relevant, too. You might consider adding a "screenshot" of Jesus converting someone.
||The grammar could use some work. (Your, you're) Also, there's some red links you should fix/remove. Also, make it longer. How it was developed would be a good idea.
||I think you've got a winning concept here. Clean it up, make it longer, and I'll be happy to review it again.
||Crazee Boy - My Talk