Well, I did't laugh hard, but I did get the jokes very well. It's obvious you have a talent for this kind of thing.
Concept:
10
Very original. I definitely wouldn't have thought of it at all. The concept itself will draw people in.
Prose and formatting:
10
Very easy to read, not cluttered at all. Very easy on the eyes.
Images:
9
Excellent use of cosplayer pictures here. The toilet was funny as well. The text is very well balanced with the pictures, and the captions were excellent, dude!
Miscellaneous:
10
No excessive usage of "penis" or anything immature like that, which is great.
Final Score:
47
Good job, man. Good job. This is front page material right here. I hope to see more of your work soon!
