Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/J.P. Morgan

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I'll piss on your article if you piss on mine. AmericanBastard 02:19, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Flyby: too random. --Mnb'z 18:58, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Humour: 7 Pretty Funny. Nothing that knocks you off your chair but it is funny.
Concept: 5 Typical "rich guy is evil" concept. It could be better. The various "twin" sections are a nice twist.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good grammar, makes article a little funnier with its authoritative stance.
Images: 8 Good use of captions. I wish that one of these would have been photoshopped with more satan or something.
Miscellaneous: 6.5 It is the beginning of something funny.
Final Score: 34.5 Overall it is beginning to be funny. It could get to VFH with a little extra work.
Reviewer: FookYooChineseFood 21:20, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
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