I'll piss on your article if you piss on mine.
AmericanBastard 02:19, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
- Flyby: too random. --Mnb'z 18:58, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
||Pretty Funny. Nothing that knocks you off your chair but it is funny.
||Typical "rich guy is evil" concept. It could be better. The various "twin" sections are a nice twist.
|Prose and formatting:
||Good grammar, makes article a little funnier with its authoritative stance.
||Good use of captions. I wish that one of these would have been photoshopped with more satan or something.
||It is the beginning of something funny.
||Overall it is beginning to be funny. It could get to VFH with a little extra work.
||FookYooChineseFood 21:20, 28 February 2009 (UTC)