A little article I created just today. Take a look... -- Le Cejak•<-> 23:30, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
Hmmm. STOP. STOP! STOP, STOP, STOP, STOP, STOP!!! Now, I'm not adverse to cheesy add-on lines featuring Matt Groening cartoons, but filling an entire article with repressed Futurama plotlines is AN IREDEEMABLE CRIME. It was funny, but certainly not original.
With a little more polish, this article could've been a lot sweter. Perahps "J'accuse: the Movie's Script" or "I Say, J'accuse" would be a more fitting title. I was half expecting the article to be about the word J'accuse, but you flew away in the face of expectaion and crapped on it magnificently - and I mean that in a good way. Bravo!
Prose and formatting:
Nothin' special, but I like the capital "T" at the begginning. Very ominous.
If your favourite colour is orange, this is the site for you! I like the shifty eyes. Here's a joke you may remember: "Give the dog shifty eyes. That way, people will suspect the dog."
Gets a little hard to read, what with the story and all. If it was more of an "article" article, it would've been easier to swallow. You have a knack for storytelling.
I can't beleive you did this all today, all in one! It's fantastic, no matter how many "STOP"s I can shove in... but unfortunately, I've no idea how long it'll last on Uncyclopedia. If I were any other user, I'd give you all 3's. Not so with me, my friend. It might work better on --shrug-- Encyclopedia Dramtica, or a story website. Until you can find an alternative route for this article, keep an eye on it because those Uncyclopedia Admins will be on to this shorty, if you only just made this today...