This is what not to do when a bird shits on you - The RIME OF THE ANCIENT MARINER! I am soooo tempted to review this right now - but I won't, I have other stuff to do. Like sleeping, for a start. --SirU.U.Esq.VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 22:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
I rarely laughed. So rarely that I forgot it was funny. There were a few points, though, like the list of band members. Needs more coherence and stick to a single form of Christianity - it'll make it funnier.
Prose and formatting:
Good spelling and grammar, but too verbose. Sort of like a Stephen King novel.