Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ingrate

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edit Ingrate

TPLN 22:13, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 5 The humor was decent, not that "ha ha" funny but still worth reading. The whole joke was a dad yelling and swearing a lot at his teenage son, and I guess this is making fun typical family arguments. Its was kind of funny the way the dad keeps shouting and losing control. It’s not that origanal, though.
Concept: 6 The concept was a bit of a cliché. The "lazy teenager" thing has been done many times before. There was a lot of swearing, and it seemed that the sentences where just fluffed up with them to keep readers interested. Again, using an excessive amount of bad words has been done a lot on this site.
Prose and formatting: 8 Asinine was spelled wrong, Microsoft word couldn’t fid any other spelling or grammar mistakes (to lazy to check if it missed anything)
Images: 6 The images aren’t really funny, but they help to show what’s happing.
Miscellaneous: 6 Averaged, rounded up because of good execution of the concept.
Final Score: 31 This is fairly entertaining, better than a bunch of the articles here. It really can't be improved that much. Go to my talk page if you want to complain about my awful reviewing skills have any questions.
Reviewer: --Snake7 01:57, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
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