The humor is there, but this is a topic that not everyone will laugh at.
How do I say that this is an acquired taste without being too, too, whats the word I'm looking for, fetishy? Seriously this is not going to light a fire under many people people as urine is not something that one desires to read about under normal circumstances, but I found the funny funny and a bit unique, so you get points from me.
Prose and formatting:
The prose is fine. I would like to see more interlinking. As for the formatting, remember that the first mention of the title repeated in tharticle should be as close to the first sentence as possible and it needs to be in BOLD. I would also like to see the image taken down to 300px max, and moved to the top of the page.
Well I'm the first to say that a picture of someone urinating on a hobo wouldn't get passed the censors, but this one works. I can practically smell him.
The article has plenty of Misc. in it, but it could use some more randomization. It starts out with the voice having had too much, but loses that midway through the article. Remember, the Uncyclopedia motto of "Foolish consistency is teh hobgobblin of little minds!"