Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/I Lost Your Pet Ferret

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edit I Lost Your Pet Ferret

A little thing I whipped up. It was based off of a conversation with a friend, which in turn was based off of the conversation here: Forum:Hey Guys!. Keep in mind it's supposed to be like a one sided phone conversation, so keep that in mind in terms of grammar and formatting. --Atomsk.gif Kaizer the Bjorn takkun Takkun (nya nya) (1961 model!) Check out T61! 03:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Dead on Stoner. Plus, this has to be one of the funniest titles I've seen in a long time.
Concept: 9 Great concept.
Prose and formatting: 7 Not amazing- it's certainly passable, but the prose itself isn't hilarious. Then again, I guess it's not the focal point of this article.
Images: 8 Not riotous, but they get the job done.
Miscellaneous: 8 The article made me laugh a hell of a lot.
Final Score: 40 Good article, but it needs a little work. First of all, as you say, it's supposed to be a one-sided phone conversation. But I can't shake the feeling it'd be funnier if you had him occasionally responding to invisible replies- ie, I don't know why, man, because I was high! You do this a little at the start, then stop. Other than that, good show, sir.
Reviewer: --SirIsaac 22:49, 13 February 2008 (EST)
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