Yet another review request. I've done another re-write job on this, and think it's a definite improvement. However, I also thing there's further improving to do, so a constructive review would be most welcome. I tried to leave some of the original text in place, but should the quote go? Should the intro be re-written? Any suggestions for new sections? Any other ideas? Anything? Anyone? Hello? --SirUnder User(Hi,HowAreYou?)VFHKUN 12:48, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
I laughed here and there, but it's not a gut-buster.