This is the 3rd review, and probably last review, of this article. I'm trying to get the article good enough for VFH, so a decent review would be appreciated. A decent review and changes to the article would be better. Thanks.
Very funny, it has quite a Pythonesque flavour. I like.
Very original, I like it.
Prose and formatting:
I really like your writing style. It works well, and keeps the reader interested... just don't use 'Okay' too much.
All appropriate and quite funny.
Looks like you're getting mostly 9s so far! :)
All in all it's very good and well thought out. I think you should include more forms of walking, esp. the Silly Walk which would fit perfectly. I think it needs to be a bit longer, but other than that it's great!