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edit HowTo:Walk like a normal person

This is the 3rd review, and probably last review, of this article. I'm trying to get the article good enough for VFH, so a decent review would be appreciated. A decent review and changes to the article would be better. Thanks.

Velosi-T 13:08, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 9 Very funny, it has quite a Pythonesque flavour. I like.
Concept: 10 Very original, I like it.
Prose and formatting: 8 I really like your writing style. It works well, and keeps the reader interested... just don't use 'Okay' too much.
Images: 9 All appropriate and quite funny.
Miscellaneous: 9 Looks like you're getting mostly 9s so far! :)
Final Score: 45 All in all it's very good and well thought out. I think you should include more forms of walking, esp. the Silly Walk which would fit perfectly. I think it needs to be a bit longer, but other than that it's great!
Reviewer: Ravenix
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