I want to get in another review now that I have more pics in the article.
- Hell, even the same reviewer as previously could do it, but judging the pics along with it.--Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 22:20, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 20:20, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
||That was hilarious. The jokes just kept coming and coming and coming. The whole "you're a pervert" perspective...oh man, it made me laugh.
||Pretty good, though not completely original. Whatever you lacked in originality you more than made up for with execution.
|Prose and formatting:
||Oh, the formatting was fine, it's just....GREAT BIG WALL O' TEXT! Try adding a few more images to those longer sections.
||Hard to home by, but nonetheless hilarious. Try to add a bit- the amount left me hungry for more.
||All you need is a few more images. This could easily make VFH, with just a few more...anyways, overall, nice job!
||Saberwolf116 15:23, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
Put these iamages