PUTTY
12:36, November 22, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour:
| 6
| I fear I didn't LOL. The jokes are there and well paced but only had me thinking "yeah, that's amusing." Needs more LOLs.
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| Concept:
| 7
| A bit meta, but not unapproachably so.
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| Prose and formatting:
| 8
| Not bad. Style works.
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| Images:
| 5
| I barely noticed them if at all. Not sure what to suggest here. Needs something though.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 6.5
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| Final Score:
| 32.5
| Not quite front-page yet, needs more LOLs and some solution to the image problem. On the way though.
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| Reviewer:
| David Gerard 00:21, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
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