Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Create a sandstorm

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edit HowTo:Create a sandstorm

This is my ecology page, a commentary on the environmental destruction of the topsoil from various sources. My other pee request, HowTo:Frighten small children is a page that no user should look at, so that's a page that should just sit there for seven days. This one, though, I would like comment on. Thanks, and no hurry. Appreciated.

  • I can try this one within 2 days. If OK...--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 15:19, May 7

Aleister in Chains 1:33 7 5 MMX

Humour: 9 All around a solid, faultless creation. I would give a 10 score if you add a section listing the benefits and disadvantages of making a sand storm, otherwise, what's the consideration? Apart from having no listed criteria to consider, it's a done deal. But without a list of benefits its an action without a purpose.
Concept: 5 The how is missing the WHY? Why make a sand storm? Or not?
Prose and formatting: 10 Great!
Images: 7 Great shots, and big, good! But lets see what a bloody sand-storm looks like..
Miscellaneous: 10 Good, creative layout
Final Score: 41 Unique, creative layout, very UnWiki, but funny. My only question are WHY? and lets see whata sand-storm looks like at 0 visibility.
Reviewer: --Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 15:43, May 7
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