Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Become the next LotofLOLS

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An in-depth guide to how to literally become LotofLOLS. --NXWave 20:31, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

HowTo:Become the next LotofLOLS
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here, let me show you how to do a review, NXWave.   Le Cejak <-> (Dec 27 / 18:18)

Humour: 4.3 avg of each section. Warning, I don't know who LotofLOLS is except that THE adopted him.
  • Intro [5]

Well, I guess I know who lotoflols is... that doesn't mean I don't think you need the proofreading service or that you shouldn't cool it with the hate. You must really dislike this guy.

  • Becoming Him [4]

Yeah, thank you for that. Again, I guess this isn't the best thing for me to review because I just. don't. care. Also, I think this is kinda mean and unnecessary.

  • What do I do? [4]

I don't think this works. It's not an ending, it's just a continuation of the rest of the article.

Concept: 4 This is not only an attempt at a continuation of a pretty lame uncyclopedia in-joke, but it's also just plain mean. I'm being fairly generous giving you a 4 here.
Prose and formatting: 4 This article is fairly ugly. (1) Short section, (2) huge block of text, (3) short section is not a good layout for any article. Also, you have a few spelling/grammar errors in there that should be cleaned up.
Images: 0 No pictures.
Miscellaneous: 3.1 {{Pee|4.3|4|4|0}}
Final Score: 15.4 Actually, I don't think I did a good job on this review. I blame myself for not seeing any answers to the question that is this article. I hope that, in the future, not only do you write reviews at least as long as this one, but that you write articles that don't attack people. I don't care what they did (unless it was racist or homophobic or something). Good luck, NX.
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> (Dec 27 / 18:33)
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