Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be a Gangsta

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Something I threw together to combat my writer's block. I think it turned out pretty well.-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 19:54, 14 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9 Me likes this. Its in your face and dead on the mark.
Concept: 8 The concept is to explain how to be something. This certainly gets it, although you could get a perfect ten if you can convince me that you actually are a gangsta.
Prose and formatting: 9 The prose is great. You aren't simpering about trying to use PC language, but had you written this in complete PC lingo it would have been a hoot.
Images: 7 Images need some work. The image of the guy and the gun is running the wrong way for being a left justified image - justify him to the right. Remember that your images should never run off the page, but towards the text. The images could be larger. They seem small and cramped. What about (God forgive me) an image of Vanilla Ice?
Miscellaneous: 10 Why a ten? Dunno. You've always been a gentleman to me.
Final Score: 43 Solid article. Spiff up the images and you have a Home-Boy run on your hands.
Reviewer: Dame PPsigPPlips.gifGUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 00:52, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
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