Hope this article is worthy if the quality expected on this site! Thank you!
Jonbob0008 15:34, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Not laugh-out-loud funny, but definitely smile-inducing as the story unfolds.
I really like the idea of taking a common phrase that no-one gives much thought to, and exploring what it could mean. And the underlying theme that it's a con perpetrated by a dishonest crook is a perfect fit here. Bravo!
Prose and formatting:
Easy to read. Written in a casual, conversational manner that's free of profanity.
Enough to start with. Perhaps 1-2 more in the naked areas would help.
Topic is pretty well explored. Good execution. Not profane or too graphically violent (well, other than the picture of blood). Complete without being too long. It could be longer, but only if each new bit directly adds additional humour.
Thoughtful and worthwhile. I'd like to see more of this type of writing on Uncyclopedia.