Hey, I made this article in about 3 hours. Tell me what'cha think! THERE ARE NO CHUCK NORRIS JOKES IN HERE, in case you were wondering. Also, the references are fucked up, and I don't know why. Anyway, thanks. Awesome. -- Le Cejak•<-> 04:19, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
The overtly-masculine theme with gay references was just what I was hoping for, and this article delivered it.
A how-to on being a man is a great idea, and you did it well.
Prose and formatting:
It looks alright, but I think could use a little straightening up here and there.
The images were a mixed bag. The man with a rifle was a good example picture, and the nerd was funny, but others make no sense, like the horse and Team Rocket.
The article drags on a bit. You should think of trimming off some things here and there, but I'll leave that desicion up to you. If you straighten it up, the length may not be such a big deal.
It made me chuckle, and with some work, could be a real winner!