I like to write a lot of things, I’m pretty good at Pee Reviews, and I received an award Author of the Month Award and one feature. Also I like Avenged Sevenfold, Modern Warfare 2, Halo 3, and brunettes and emo girls.
When I read this article, I was like “wow”.
You have a sound concept here, and you stuck with it the entire time. You used up valuable research and I can tell because I looked some of that up. Way to go!
Prose and Formatting:
Couple of mistakes here, as you do tend to mix your there with theirs. Go over them with the spell-check on MS Word’s spell-check
I thought it was pretty funny, and you use a lot of cool things. Good job
The images were perfect. I don’t think this needs any criticism
My overall grade of this article
Sorry it took me forever again. I not usually like that (anymore). Last week was a pain in the ass, so I apologize for that. Anyways, I know I'm suppose to be indepth, but I think it fine as it is, with the exception of the grammar errors. If you have any questions/comments, just go to my talk page and I’ll be happy to answer them. Good Luck! Cheers!