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edit History of the World: Part 2

Any contributions would really help. Going to have to re-write this one a bit, but if anyone has any critics or advice ahead of time, please tell me. The more advice, the better chance this article has of becoming better. Cheers Oliphaunte--The fate of our lives is driven by interpretive dance 21:21, December 24, 2010 (UTC) 04:44, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Really not that funny.
Concept: 8 I like the concept of having a part 2, but you don't mention any of Brooks' trailer skits (i.e. Hitler on Ice, Jews in Space)
Prose and formatting: 5 The layout is pretty incoherent and the information is just sitting there. There's no sectioned layout. Sections are your friend!
Images: 6 The Scotland Crossbar photo is the only one with a really funny potential.
Miscellaneous: 6.3 Averaged.
Final Score: 31.3 I really didn't enjoy reading it. I think if you added some more funny pictures, added some of Mel's skits for Part 2, and broke them up into sections (shorter would be nice), it could be much funnier.
Reviewer: --ComradeSlice, Grue Army (92 Squadron)  06:23, December 27, 2010 (UTC)
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