Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Grand Theft Auto: Australia

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edit Grand Theft Auto: Australia

SilveryMinnow 00:50, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 6.5 I thought some of this was funny (especially the weapons & references), the rest was just a snicker.
Concept: 6 There are quite a few GTA articles, so yours needs to stand out, and I didnt sense it standing out.
Prose and formatting: 6 There was an unneccessary line, it needed more content and a bit too many lists.
Images: 5 There were 4 images. The cat one wasn't very funny, the GTA:A one was allright, and the Steve Irwin one wasn't used correctly. I did like the use of the fat kid. I'd reccomend more images, such as one of a stingray killing someone in GTA. perhaps you should make or request something like that?
Miscellaneous: 6 The lists should be shortened, and some content needs to be fixed, or rearranged.
Final Score: 29.5 This article was acceptable, but i didn't find it very funny in the first half. It needs more images, more than anything else.
Reviewer: ~ NEZLR Dancingmilk Th stupidMewhenreadingstupidstuff Seizure Donuts
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