I thought some of this was funny (especially the weapons & references), the rest was just a snicker.
There are quite a few GTA articles, so yours needs to stand out, and I didnt sense it standing out.
Prose and formatting:
There was an unneccessary line, it needed more content and a bit too many lists.
There were 4 images. The cat one wasn't very funny, the GTA:A one was allright, and the Steve Irwin one wasn't used correctly. I did like the use of the fat kid. I'd reccomend more images, such as one of a stingray killing someone in GTA. perhaps you should make or request something like that?
The lists should be shortened, and some content needs to be fixed, or rearranged.
This article was acceptable, but i didn't find it very funny in the first half. It needs more images, more than anything else.