Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Gollum

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Pilkster 15:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Humour: 7 Overall I'd say it's okay. I feel that the 3rd paragraph in "movie deal and rise to fame" needs to be tweaked- I love LOTR so I know who Viggo Mortensen is but will other, not so devoted readers? (please be clear so the idiots that read the page know exactly what (or whom) you're talking about)
Concept: 7.5 The idea that Tolkien and Gollum were users and abusers of many things is an interesting concept (certainly explains Gollum's appearance) and perhaps could be expanded upon?-just don't overdo it to the point of it being stupid. Personally I'd like to see some more Lord of the Rings references and content woven into it.
Prose and formatting: 10 I really don't see any problems with the prose/formatting and I'm a Grammar Nazi.
Images: 7 I burst out laughing when I saw the first picture and its caption. Second is fairly appropriate as well. A couple more pictures with decent captions would really hit the spot though, preferably if they were edited (or not) LOTR pics with appropriate captions.
Miscellaneous: 7.9 I just averaged your score. The redlinks were a bit distracting as i was reading it. I might clean those up after I'm done here though.
Final Score: 39.4 All and all, I enjoyed reading this article and I look forward to any future updates made.
Reviewer: --Fe^{+3} AlFe^{+2} 03:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
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