The humor effect is seen on an off through out the article, and when it does come in, it's too weak to really hit you. also, the article is too long to make the humour a strong part of the article. "Evil" jokes become weary quickly.
I dont think they is much to say except in terms of creativity its one of the worst articles ive ever read. the concept just drones
Prose and formatting:
Excellently formatted article, no mistakes whatsoever.
Images are good and reflect off of the article, but lack humor.
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i like that there were no mistakes, but other than that its garbage.