Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Gerbil (musical instrument)

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edit Gerbil (musical instrument)

I got this idea in the village dump, and decided to make it into an artikle. Opinions? --THE 20:45, 27 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9 consistent laughs here. none of the sections drag or lack funniness. the emo joke isn't out of place or lame, it actually works (who knew!?)
Concept: 9.5 love the concept.
Prose and formatting: 5 no major problems, it just needs length. more sections would do better than adding to existing sections, as they work well the way they are. what i do when i'm looking for length is check the wikipedia article (or in this case a similar one, like for any instrument) for ideas for other sections. maybe tuning your gerbil, parts of the gerbil, gerbil accessories?
Images: 0 no images. if you could come up with an image of a person 'playing' a gerbil that would be ideal. also maybe an image of a gerbil with parts clearly labeled.
Miscellaneous: 6 "(note: trombones also are capable of having sex, but most are infertile). " hehehe
Final Score: 29.5 great start. with images and a little length you'll have a solid article worthy of praise and admiration.
Reviewer: --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 21:45, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
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