I got this idea in the village dump, and decided to make it into an artikle. Opinions? --THE 20:45, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
consistent laughs here. none of the sections drag or lack funniness. the emo joke isn't out of place or lame, it actually works (who knew!?)
love the concept.
Prose and formatting:
no major problems, it just needs length. more sections would do better than adding to existing sections, as they work well the way they are. what i do when i'm looking for length is check the wikipedia article (or in this case a similar one, like for any instrument) for ideas for other sections. maybe tuning your gerbil, parts of the gerbil, gerbil accessories?
no images. if you could come up with an image of a person 'playing' a gerbil that would be ideal. also maybe an image of a gerbil with parts clearly labeled.
"(note: trombones also are capable of having sex, but most are infertile). " hehehe
great start. with images and a little length you'll have a solid article worthy of praise and admiration.