I got this idea in the village dump, and decided to make it into an artikle. Opinions? --THE 20:45, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
9
consistent laughs here. none of the sections drag or lack funniness. the emo joke isn't out of place or lame, it actually works (who knew!?)
Concept:
9.5
love the concept.
Prose and formatting:
5
no major problems, it just needs length. more sections would do better than adding to existing sections, as they work well the way they are. what i do when i'm looking for length is check the wikipedia article (or in this case a similar one, like for any instrument) for ideas for other sections. maybe tuning your gerbil, parts of the gerbil, gerbil accessories?
Images:
0
no images. if you could come up with an image of a person 'playing' a gerbil that would be ideal. also maybe an image of a gerbil with parts clearly labeled.
Miscellaneous:
6
"(note: trombones also are capable of having sex, but most are infertile). " hehehe
Final Score:
29.5
great start. with images and a little length you'll have a solid article worthy of praise and admiration.
