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I need to get caught up on my CW entries. Icons-flag-pi Pirate Lord__Sonic80 (Yell  •  Latest literary excretion) __ 18:55, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Good. However, I think the introduction could be made funnier somehow.
Concept: 6 I like the concept, it's well done. However, some parts of it could have been followed through better, particularly the introduction and Ways to Destroy section.
Prose and formatting: 9 I don't have any problem with the way this article is written.
Images: 8 I liked the image that was there at the top, but it appears that the other image you put in was nonexistent or something. The second image was good after having been showed it, but it could also use some more images, perhaps a 'chopped image of someone hitting one off a wall for the destroying section?
Miscellaneous: 7.8 Avg'd via {{Pee}}.
Final Score: 38.8 Score apparently between above average to having a chance on VFD with improvement. This article has been done well. The only problems I have with it are the fact that I think the concept could have been carried out better, and the images. Other than that, good work!
Reviewer: MafiaHatBrown.gif Judge Adriano "Legal" Zarbi Icons-flag-gb Talk!
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