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A non-in-depth review would be great. kthnxbi (For those who are culturally inept: Use this as a guide (especially the comments).) Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  25 Oct 2010 ~ 08:28 (UTC)

Really non-in-depth, in fact it's just a comment: That's just odd. But how are the culturally inept supposed to get any of it without that link, eh? ~ Pointy *shifty eyes* (talk) (stalk) -- 20101025 - 15:59 (UTC)

Ya know, I thought that too... thus one reason for Pee Review.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  26 Oct 2010 ~ 23:37 (UTC)
Humour: 8 Greetings, Happytimes. My mistress Lyrithya (in the dominatrix sense of the word, mind you) ordered me to do this review. I am thus forced to do this review. This is the reason why this review will probably disappoint you in some way. Alright, here I go.

I like the humour in this article. Your Whoops! is brilliant! I also like how you omitted Belgium from the key member states of the European Union, as, quite honestly, it sucks. I know that from experience. Additionally, I love how you say the howitzers are protected from mimes. The descriptions of the Wikimedia projects were hilarious as well. You also use very appropriate links. However, you failed to link codeine, while creating a red link to "promethazine". Red links on a disambiguation page are only allowed when they're funny. I did not laugh at "promethazine", sorry. This is the main reason why I can't give you a score of 10 in this section.

Concept: 8 I love this concept. Parodying a disambiguation page is a very original thing to do, even though I did it a couple times too (not as good as you, of course). However, I went to Wikipedia and I spotted a couple other hilarious entries you could have used. This is why I can't give you a full score here either.
Prose and formatting: 8 Your prose was excellent! I did not notice any formatting errors either. Splendid! I must note however, that there was something about it lacking the flow of a normal article. This is why I've given you a score of only 8 in this section.
Images: 0 Happytimes. You're an experienced user. You should know by now that an article isn't complete unless it has an image. Seriously, the music video of "Like a G6" features more than enough images you could use. For example, at the end some quasi-niggas are getting on a plane. You can take a screenshot of that and add a caption like "These people are gonna fly like a G6." or something. No images, so a zero in this section, Happytimes.
Miscellaneous: 8 I generally use the "Miscellaneous" section to provide the score corresponding with the overall feel of the article. I'm applying this method in this review as well. As you can see, I only gave you an eight in this section. This means there is definitely still room for improvement.
Final Score: 32 Thirty-two is not such a bad score, but it means you're still ten numbers removed from The Answer to The Ultimate Question of Life, The Universe, and Everything. (Not to be confused with The Answer to The Great Question of Life, The Universe, and Everything.)
Reviewer: Sir SockySexy girls Mermaid with dolphin Tired Marilyn Monroe (talk) (stalk)Magnemite Icons-flag-be GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 00:59, 23 November 2010
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