Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Fred Figglehorn

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edit Fred Figglehorn

Maniac mcpee signatureManiac mcpee signature talkzoneChompy domo-kun-small 18:35, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Humour: 2 Put in some work into your article and make it funny and not just stupid. Right now, I do think you could develop it a little further.
Concept: 3 Notable subject for an article and this is a good way to start about it. It still needs more editing and more work done. As I said up above before.
Prose and formatting: 2 I recommend adding with two or three of the list entries.
Images: 1 There needs to be more images. Just one doesn't cut it. The article would benefit from alot more.
Miscellaneous: 2 Read more of BGBU and HTBFANJS.
Final Score: 10 Again, I do think you could develop it a little further, but change the ugly formatting and work on editing it more so it will be funny. It seems to me that you need to read more of BGBU and HTBFANJS.
Reviewer: DJ Mixerr 07:17, January 23, 2011 (UTC) DJMIXERR (talk)(contributions)


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