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Fourth Wall

Hopefully this doesn't suck. Maybe it does. That's what you're here for, though. It would help to know what the fourth wall is. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:31, Mar 26

Humour:	8	Very funny throughout, not quite laugh out loud funny for me.
Concept:	8	Great concept, well executed. If I have any criticism it is that in the beginning of the article you say that I broke the 4th wall, and then later you are begging for me to break it and let you out. Maybe a slight mistake, maybe I'm confused.
Prose and formatting:	8	Good spelling, usage, and punctuation. The contents look a little strange with no sub-sections.
Images:	10	Perfect use of relevant images.
Miscellaneous:	8.5	Great job.
Final Score:	42.5	To improve the article further, I would add a couple subsections and at least a few more links towards the end so that the paragraphs don't look bland.
Reviewer:	--Brainspew 13:48, 26 March 2008 (UTC)