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Hopefully this doesn't suck. Maybe it does. That's what you're here for, though. It would help to know what the fourth wall is. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:31, Mar 26

Humour: 8 Very funny throughout, not quite laugh out loud funny for me.
Concept: 8 Great concept, well executed. If I have any criticism it is that in the beginning of the article you say that I broke the 4th wall, and then later you are begging for me to break it and let you out. Maybe a slight mistake, maybe I'm confused.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good spelling, usage, and punctuation. The contents look a little strange with no sub-sections.
Images: 10 Perfect use of relevant images.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 Great job.
Final Score: 42.5 To improve the article further, I would add a couple subsections and at least a few more links towards the end so that the paragraphs don't look bland.
Reviewer: --Brainspew 13:48, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
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