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TillDillBill
This article is good, however I believe it can be improved by:
  • Darth Sidious/Darth Plagues Ability to use the force to create an unexpected pregnancy (that could be an opening quote)
  • It can be added to the Star Wars Template under Other (see the bottom of the Star Wars article).
  • The pictures could be moved to be beside the text to look aesthetically better
  • Yoda is able to stop Count Dooku's Force Lightening with his hand in Episode 2
  • Jar Jar Binks' weird Force Shenanigans in Episode 1
  • Leader Snoke and his "Administrator" Role over the Force in Episode 8
  • Luke and Lea's Force Skype Connection with each other, along with Kylo and Rey Force FaceTime Connection
  • Being able to stop Blaster Bolts in Mid-Air using the Force
  • Sensing a Disturbance in the Force
  • Droids not having the ability to use it (Minus that one from a EU Comic I once read about that Droid that Ben goes for in Episode 4 instead of R2-D2 but then it blows up - it's called "Skippy the Jedi Droid")
  • Luke being able to do an astral protection of himself in Episode 8
  • Force Ghosts. Especially Yoda, who in ghost form can use the Force to call down Lightening from the sky (So I guess he's a Sith?) in Episode 8
  • Ambiguity surrounding the criteria to become such a Force Ghost.
  • The Force being used as a blessing for health by non-force users (May the Force be with you).
  • Using the Force to Choke your Lieutenant through a Communication Link and technically shouldn't be Possible.
  • The Prophecy regarding the Chosen One
  • The planet Mortis and the three ancient Force Users from that one Clone Wars Episode where Anakin is given the temporary future knowledge that he'll be Darth Vader later down the line (it's removed at the end to preserve canon)
  • The Grey are what lies inbetween the Jedi and Sith, there some sort of weird Bendu Creature that can teach people about it.
I look forward to reading it again.
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