Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Fire Vs. Water

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edit Fire Vs. Water

My first article in months, and would like some urine to put out the fire. ~ NEZLR Dancingmilk Th stupidMewhenreadingstupidstuff Seizure Donuts 22:20, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

man, is anybody gonna take this on?

Humour: 8 Ok, this is the first article I pee'd on today that's actually made me laugh. The age old conflict of fire vs. water is a big thing, and I think you did it justice. Some total denial, a little bit of random funnyness and a crazy reversal at the end all make this article hilaruous. It's a little skinny, you know, could eat a little more text food, but otherwise is excellent.
Concept: 7 I gave you a lower score on this section only because it seems a little obvious to make an article about this, but I'm glad you were the one who made it, it was grrreeeaaaat. By the end, the whole thing came together with the last two pics.
Prose and formatting: 10 I can't complain, I didn't see any problems.
Images: 8 Good images, defiantely no issues with them, all formatted well, maybe you could add some more, just because you could get some even MORE off the wall pics.
Miscellaneous: 10 It was funny, so I gave you 10 extra points
Final Score: 43 All very well done, all very well put together no serious complaints, no complaints at all really, Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: --Kowaru 22:26, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
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