Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/FIFA Middle Earth Cup
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Just your average review please, and nothing TOO harsh (if it really is that bad). --Some Idiot 00:45, July 7, 2010 (UTC)
Some Idiot 00:45, July 7, 2010 (UTC)
|Humour:||5.2||It needs some work on the jokes. Consider timing and complexity, is it universal or just subject to the people well aware of The Lord of the Rings' books, movies, ect. I suggest a healthy mix of universal and specific jokes.|
|Concept:||9.5||A concept and/or concepts that eventually would have been thought of. (I credit you with the original stuff though and not the overall idea of The FIFA Middle Earth Cup.)|
|Prose and formatting:||7.7||It looks like it can be slightly improved in manner of writing, also spotted an error - The FIFA Middle Earth Cup originated when Sauron decided that they weren't having enough wars so he devised a...|
|Images:||8.8||The logo for the first FIFA Middle Earth Cup is the only image that seems to not mix in well with the rest. I suggest delation or improvment...fix that and the score should be 9.|
|Miscellaneous:||7.2||Meh... Fix the quotes floating above, they sorta turned me off if you know what I mean.|
|Final Score:||38.4||Make sure to review the Pikachu page right, your supposed to make out what there talking about by checking were the links would take you. I'll give you a hint; it involves Nazi Pikachu, illegal Pichu pornography (metaphor), Pokemon franchise, ect... Oh and take note that it is catogorized in the nonesense table. People are not supposed to fully know what it says. Take the AAAAAAAAA! or EBG13 pages as examples.
Sorry if my review doesn't have enough information or has spelling/grammer errors. This is my first review K.
|Reviewer:||Mad Scientist Adam Mada 01:31, July 7, 2010 (UTC) Mad Scientist Adam Mada|