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In-depth review, please! Has already been reviewed by OEJ who sorta liked it.   Le Cejak <May 20, 2008 [16:19]>

Humour: 8 Very funny throughout, I love the concept. Let's see...when revising, I'd target the section where she interviews Satan, which I thought was least compelling. It doesn't seem you've got as strong a concept for that section. Maybe if Satan was set free because of the "cruel and unusual punishment," and becomes a hero in the eyes of the American public because he endured police brutality? That could be intriguing. Also, the "what has Barbara Walters learned?" section seemed a bit meh. It could be improved.
Concept: 9 Wonderful concept. The number of interviews seemed just right--not so many that it becomes repetitive, yet not too few either. The length of the interviews is good too.
Prose and formatting: 8 I only noticed one error and I fixed it. You might want to proofread it again yourself though because I tend to miss thigns.
Images: 6.5 Could use a few more images. You've got plenty of evil-doers in there...just add images of a few more of 'em and you'll be all set. Also, the caption for the Barbara Walters picture at the top seemed a bit...off. It didn't really fit with the writing style of the rest of the article. A new one would be nifty. And yes, I seriously did just use the word "nifty."
Miscellaneous: 8 Averaged.
Final Score: 39.5 Splendid work.
Reviewer: --THE 18:42, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
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