Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Everybody Hates Dubya (Television Series)

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edit Everybody Hates Dubya (Television Series)

Tried about three months ago but it fell short touched it up a little bit, but hopefully it will work this time I have no problem with whoring my article out.--Dr. Fenwick 01:43, 16 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Pretty good, and I can't really think of a lot of improvements you can make. You barely mention some facets of the show that you bring up, but don't add so much of everything that the article seems convoluted.
Concept: 8 Didn't seem amazing in concept from the title, but once you started elaborating it proved to be very Uncyclopedian.
Prose and formatting: 9 Format seems to very closely mimic that of a wikipedia article on a TV show, which is good. Make up some bullshit about the show and say it's remarkable and unique about the show in the introduction.
Images: 6 Most images are well-placed, but you could do with a couple more of them (try and photoshop Bush into a video still of some movie about a predominantly black school).
Miscellaneous: 7 Work on some spelling and semantics, as it gets confusing in a couple places.
Final Score: 38 Very good, don't be afraid to make it even more absurd (without going overboard). Keep rolling with it and you'll have a popular or feature-worthy article.
Reviewer: --Kickflipthecat 17:31, 16 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks I appreaciate the review.--Dr. Fenwick 02:22, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

Didn't I do some largescale touch ups on this one? Why is it tagged for proofreading? --THINKER 03:30, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
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