Any improvemnets you think this article needs?
Doomdealer666 13:57, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
Humour:
7
Probably would have found it funnier if i was english. Good parody of history, so much so it's almost an accurate account.
Anyone that hates the french is worth my vote, and the line about Englands dumping grounds is gold.
Politics could use spicing up, I expected more about the queen.
Religion, mixing the sport and religion was pretty good, what is 1 x 10 to the power of 33?
Military, WW2 is always good to make fun of, again giving the french shit! good stuff. The war of independence despite being only 1 sentence, was the funniest.
Concept:
7
Not a great deal of thought behind the concept however. England really exists and this stuff more or less actually happened. Althought the currency was clever. So was sport and religion.
People who are not english. That heading alone is worth a mark
Prose and formatting:
8
Very easy to follow and understand, well set up.
Images:
10
The Jesus saves image is worth money. That alone gets top marks.
The image in politics is funnier than the written section itself
Miscellaneous:
7
Didn't go overboard on the random crap, always a plus! You were right though, it is overly british.
Final Score:
39
7+7+8+10+7= 39
Informative. It was informative, despite being untrue this article mixes the truth with bullshit, making it a great parody.
Entertaining. Much of it was very amusing, but the parts that were not are frankly, boring.
Anything else. Are you sure you can't expand on this more? England is a big topic. What about fox hunting?
