Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Edward the blue engine (quick)

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edit Edward the blue engine

I really want to know how I can improve this article, to stop it from going the same way as two of my other articles, and dying young. I am only an unadopted n00b, though. Pity me.

JeNkIn (lol cheese) 13:09, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 3 Not very funny. Does anyone really watch this show anymore? To make it funnier, make the jokes more universally appealing, not just funny to people who watch this show.
Concept: 5 The idea of creating a crossover between the Harry Potter universe and the Thomas The Tank Engine universe (they're both in England) is novel. However it's badly executed and lacks focus.
Prose and formatting: 2 The writing is extremely inconsistent, and not it a funny way. It just looks like you're jumping from one idea to another with no apparent focus at all. Randomness can be funny, but this is not funny-random. It's stupid-random.
Images: 2 There's only one image, and it's a shitty one. Go get better quality images.
Miscellaneous: 5 To your credit, the topic is esoteric and has potential for greatness. It's just strange enough to become surreal humor. Spend more time on it too.
Final Score: 17 Spend more time writing this article. Look at featured articles and see what they did to be considered funny.
Reviewer: W.T. Door 14:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
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